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Animus Moderators ([personal profile] animusmods) wrote in [community profile] towerofjamjars2011-09-04 04:38 pm
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September HMD


1) Comment to this post with a list of your characters! This meme, by the way, is voluntary but recommended.

2) Give and receive constructive criticism! We'll be watching and we will intervene if flames are being thrown about. Additionally, this is for commenting on the characters, and not the people playing them.

3) This meme is more for concrit than compliments--there will be a compliments meme for straight-out love, don't worry.

Re: Terra

[identity profile] weirderscience.livejournal.com 2011-09-04 09:39 pm (UTC)(link)
I will be brave. I will deliver crit. I will... run away sob.

/what I did a few minutes ago ; ;

Seriously though. I know that Canada is an AU, but sometimes her personality doesn't quite match up with her app and her canon self. Not always, but sometimes. It seems as if she could be a little... gentler in her actions when she meets new people? You say she's very quiet and ladylike and rarely gets riled up, but it seems like sometimes you're playing her closer to how you use, say, the Disciple (who I am judging by more than the terrorthread she has with Mao, promise /shot). She shows stronger emotions easier, and speaks her mind a lot more than I would expect a Canada to do.

This is really just a suggestion, since she is an AU and kind of your creation and all. But it's just a thought that keeps popping up in my head and I figure I should let it out now. /passive aggressive sob

[identity profile] pineandmaple.livejournal.com 2011-09-04 09:48 pm (UTC)(link)
No you're right I feel. And I sort of go 'aaaa' at myself a lot because there's moments where I don't put as much thought into 'should she or would she do this or say this'. And then I go back and go 'oh yes she probably shouldn't have been so direct or something'.

It's something I can't really get away with even saying as an AU. I would say that Nyotalia is described as its own universe with girls who act different in ways from their counterparts in Hetalia. Canako was never meant to be as quiet as Canada but she is definitely too loud or direct at times and I will definitely work on it!