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towerofjamjars2011-09-04 04:38 pm
animusmods) wrote in towerofjamjars2011-09-04 04:38 pm
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1) Comment to this post with a list of your characters! This meme, by the way, is voluntary but recommended.
2) Give and receive constructive criticism! We'll be watching and we will intervene if flames are being thrown about. Additionally, this is for commenting on the characters, and not the people playing them.
3) This meme is more for concrit than compliments--there will be a compliments meme for straight-out love, don't worry.
Jen!
Nayru
Terra
[OU] Fluttershy (
[AU6] Disciple (
Debs
calvin.
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And even though he's totally new, just in case:
Mao [ou] -- Disgaea 3
Katie
OU Rose Lalonde //
Ru
*Note* In this setting I definitely play up Molly's innocence and lack of intelligence/smarts and such. The reason for that is because she knows that when she acts like that it makes people smile and in this tower they need to stay positive! Let me know if I'm going too far with it.
Kanaya Maryam | Homestuck |
*Note* I'm mostly worried about her language and vocabulary and such @@
Wingus
Hino Eiji [OU] | Kamen Rider OOO |
Fawkes [OU] | Fallout 3 |
Come at me, bro. I'm ready.
LA
Tell me to be move active and stop sucking. go go go.
Chey
Sarahkat
anything besides "be more active" would be lovely, I know I really need to step up or step out
Fish
Haven't had much time to do stuff with him due to hiatuses BUT JUST IN CASE. He's still a new muse so I'd like input. /)__(\
+ Name: Gira
Zero
trying to work on my activity, but anything else would be great
Jenny
Meredy [OU] | Tales of Eternia |
I know I need to work on my activity because it's been spotty at best.
Fanny
Kim
Karkat Vantas [OU] | Homestuck |
Dean Winchester [OU] | Supernatural |
✧Activity is an issue I am aware of and am working on.
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I am also aware I need to actually intro Dean first hoho.Sire
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There isn't much I can say about your Karkat just because I... Haven't been able to play with him much. But what I have seen seems pretty spot on! One thing I've noticed is that you seem to have a tendency to drop threads. :(
Annnd Dean hasn't introed yet this comment is kind of lame I'm sorry :
Kitty
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I will try to fix that though as with the activity! You are welcomed to bop me over the head if you see me even appear to be dropping threads! :<
Thank you for the crit! ;u; your comment was not lame at all shoosh
Cnd
Signless [AU] |
Re: Terra
/what I did a few minutes ago ; ;
Seriously though. I know that Canada is an AU, but sometimes her personality doesn't quite match up with her app and her canon self. Not always, but sometimes. It seems as if she could be a little... gentler in her actions when she meets new people? You say she's very quiet and ladylike and rarely gets riled up, but it seems like sometimes you're playing her closer to how you use, say, the Disciple (who I am judging by more than the terrorthread she has with Mao, promise /shot). She shows stronger emotions easier, and speaks her mind a lot more than I would expect a Canada to do.
This is really just a suggestion, since she is an AU and kind of your creation and all. But it's just a thought that keeps popping up in my head and I figure I should let it out now. /passive aggressive sob
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It's something I can't really get away with even saying as an AU. I would say that Nyotalia is described as its own universe with girls who act different in ways from their counterparts in Hetalia. Canako was never meant to be as quiet as Canada but she is definitely too loud or direct at times and I will definitely work on it!
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aave
I have been atrocious with activity since the day I got here, but anything beyond that would be lovely!
Re: Jen!
(Anonymous) 2011-09-04 11:15 pm (UTC)(link)I guess one example I could dig up was this (http://animus-network.livejournal.com/13747.html?thread=1016499#t1016499). First of all, I am pretty sure no where in canon has it ever been said Tavros' blood is 'orange'-- it is most definitely brown. But most importantly, I really can't see Terezi making that comment she made towards the bottom there, about the subject of the comic. It's exactly the kind of morbid humor that Terezi herself seems to enjoy-- I mean really, she holds fake trials and hangs dolls outside her windows to simulate hangings. She even treated Tavros' death in canon like a game, and didn't really have any sort of sadness or problem with it besides 'OH NO GOTTA GET VRISKA FOR HER CRIMES'.
So yeah! Just food for thought. I'm sure you have the potential to be a lovely Terezi :)
Re: Jen!
But the morbid humor is something I need to work on, and I will definitely do that. <3
Other than that, is there something else "off"? I wish you could be more specific!
ETA: re the orange thing: I tend to go off of this (http://mspaintadventures.wikia.com/wiki/Trolls#Blood_and_Caste) chart for color names, which isn't an excuse I was just... Trying to explain my reasoning haha.
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[AU]
I know I should be more active, particularly with Lithuania. I tend to get caught up in mod stuff, ahaha.
casey
don't look at my activity oh my god i just started a new job and i've been having trouble keeping up while getting used to working again
Chris
Re: Jen!
(Anonymous) 2011-09-05 01:57 am (UTC)(link)if it comes up again, i'll point it out to you! but i really cant put my finger on it right now. (hopefully i wont even need to!)
by the way, the anon on your HMD isn't working! else I would have posted there rather than here.
Re: Jen!
Leah
Man-D
I know she's fairly different from HS!canon, so if anyone wants any explanations or anything, let me know.
No one saw that fail.
Kits
Castiel [OU] | Supernatural |
Char
Note: Man, it can be hard to separate him from his canon self at times, and then at other times it's glaring obvious, but yeah. It's really been a balancing act and I'll try to take anything anyone has to say if they bear his AU in mind into account!
Plus
Ankh [OU] | Kamen Rider OOO |
Alright let's do it. Do it to it.