towerofjamjars | How's My Driving?

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How's My Driving?

JANUARY HMD

1) Comment to this post with a list of your characters! This meme, by the way, is voluntary but recommended.

2) Give and receive constructive criticism! We'll be watching and we will intervene if flames are being thrown about. Additionally, this is for commenting on the characters, and not the people playing them.

3) This meme is more for concrit than compliments--there will be a compliments meme for straight-out love, don't worry.

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animusmods

America | Axis Powers Hetalia |

colonial | Journal HMD

Just Colette here!

Romeo | Romeo's Blue Skies |

myblueskies
Suzaku Kururugi | Code Geass |

swordofzero
Shion | No. 6 |

savedbyasong
Taiki | 12 Kingdoms |

notagiraffe
Nesir Aeser | Original Character |

culbutiri

Edited (of course I messed up the html) 2013-01-01 21:42 (UTC)

Kyoko Sakura | Puella Magi Madoka Magica |

prayed | Private HMD

Edited 2013-01-02 06:32 (UTC)

John Egbert | Homestuck [au2]|

ghostytrainer

There's a an anon-enabled, screened hmd post on his journal if you'd rather go that route.

Archer || Fate/stay night ||

swordedpast || Personal HMD

Tohko Amano-Bungaku Shoujo-tohko_amano
chaos-Xenosaga-lightofhumanity

I meant to bring this up earlier, I apologize for not doing so sooner.

Something I think would be of benefit would be to be more careful about would be making sure you can draw the line between OOC and IC knowledge, basically infomodding. In Xion's recent network post about marriage, things were fine until Tohko jumped to explaining how she was from a singular world with many different places - as opposed to Xion being from a universe with many different worlds.

While it's true that Xion is from a universe with different worlds, I'm not sure how Tohko could have known that at the time of their conversation. Xion could have been (and in fact was) referring to the "different worlds" of the people in the Tower, not her home universe. Tohko and Xion have never interacted previously, and Xion didn't mention what her universe was like, nor did she reveal any connection to Kingdom Hearts castmates who may have brought it up. So, overall, I'm not sure Tohko could have known what Xion's home universe is like.

Another example is in a recent thread where Tohko asked Sephiroth about black materia when, so far as I know, nobody has mentioned or showed her what the black materia looks like, or indeed what materia even is.

If I'm wrong, and you can explain why she replied the way she did that takes all this into account, then I apologize and feel free to disregard this. It's just something I felt I should point out, in case you were unaware.

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Byakuya Togami | Dangan Ronpa |

egotist

Anon and screen enabled HMD at his journal. I welcome any suggestions/comments/crits.

Nunnally vi Britannia ❥ Code Geass [OU]

Dark Rin ❥ Fate/Stay Night [AU]

Aschen Brödel ❥ Super Robot Wars OG Saga [OU]

Satsuki Yumizuka ❥ Tsukiblood [OU]

Monster ❥ Kara no Kyoukai [AU]

Shion Uzuki | Xenosaga |

uzuki | Journal HMD
Tear Grants | Tales of the Abyss |

holychord | Journal HMD

My journal HMDs should have anon enabled and comments screened, so if you're more comfortable giving crit that way, please feel free~

Zelda | Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time |

sageprincess

Kanaya Maryam ♍ Homestuck ♍

glowsferatu

puppy_lancer --> Lancer (Fate/ AU)

worldend_dominator --> Rosa Ushiromiya (Umineko OU)

terreifying --> (Evangelion AU)

I honestly have a hard time tagging your Lancer and for two big reasons.

The first one is that you seem to play Lancer as if he was dumb as dirt. Don't get me wrong, Lancer isn't exactly a walking genius but he's not stupid either. Making bad decisions or having bad luck is one thing but he knows his stuff and, when it comes to street smarts, he's pretty on the ball. Having any type of conversation with him is like slamming a head against a brick wall, especially when it should be in things he knows about.

My second reason more pertains to something overall but when you tag, often times, it feels like you don't read what you're tagged with. It gets a little frustrating to have to repeat the same things in a thread over and over again, or in a worse scenario, sometimes you have your characters ask something that was answered in the tag that you're replying too. It's a little disheartening, to be honest.

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Alright, too lazy to login to the right account. Hope this is okay.

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Reno - Final Fantasy VII -

midgarhorizon
Lucien Lachance - The Elder Scrolls -

silentdeath
Marty McFly - Back to the Future -

deloreandriver
Azula - Avatar: The Last Airbender -

always_lies

Satsujinki (Shiki Tohno) | Tsukihime AU |

concept_killer
Axel Almer | Super Robot Wars |

surpassthelimit

3D-Specs Zahhak |

geometry
Bittienzo |

grimgrimoire

Lucifer | Shin Megami Tensei |

firstofthefallen
AU Pokey Minch | Earthbound/Game Transplant: Mayfield |

ceasetoexist

I know my tagging speed has been erratic and I apologize for that as this season at work has been killer. As we get away from the holidays I should be able to set up a more constant speed.