How's My Driving?

[animusmods]

October HMD

1) Comment to this post with a list of your characters! This meme, by the way, is voluntary but recommended.

2) Give and receive constructive criticism! We'll be watching and we will intervene if flames are being thrown about. Additionally, this is for commenting on the characters, and not the people playing them.

3) This meme is more for concrit than compliments--there will be a compliments meme for straight-out love, don't worry.

Comments

[animusmods]

towerofanimus

[fifty]

Mel
[OU] America | Axis Powers Hetalia | evertosoar)
[AU] Lithuania | Axis Powers Hetalia | letunityblossom

[thursdaywings.livejournal.com]

Kits

[AU2] Spain | Axis Powers Hetalia (Nyotalia) | latomatetas
[OU] Castiel | Supernatural | thursdaywings
[OU] Applejack | My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic | applebuckmaster

Ana

[reverse-destiny.livejournal.com]

[AU1] Sora | Kingdom Hearts | reverse_destiny

[cantgetlaidin.livejournal.com]

Calvin;

OU!Germany | Axis Powers Hetalia | cantgetlaidin

[grimauxilatrix.livejournal.com]

Ru~

Molly Hayes [OU] Runaways princesspowaful
*Note* I'm still a bit worried about how I play up her innocence for the setting, but hopefully with this plot I can bring out her bravery and intelligence!

Kanaya Maryam [OU] Homestuck grimauxilatrix
*Note* Still worried about language and vocabulary @_@

Santana Lopez [OU] Glee straightupzorra

[princesslantern.livejournal.com]

Your Molly is great. But I think you need to be careful on how she portrays herself. Yeah, she says funny, hyper stuff a lot of the time, and she plays dumb sometimes, but be careful not to overdo it with the playing dumb. Remember, even though the rest of the team treats her like a baby, she's in middle school, and she's in that weird inbetween part of her life where she's going "oh god do i act grown up or do I let people take care of me WHAT DO WHAT DO" But she's not a baby by any means.

[drpercivalcox.livejournal.com]

Xen

[OU] Perry Cox | Scrubs | drpercivalcox
[AU1] Ninth Doctor | Doctor Who | iseethoseflaws
[OU] Iroh | Avatar: The Last Airbender | dragonothewest

[knightofangst.livejournal.com]

Katy

[Ou] Suzaku Kururugi | Code Geass | lj user="knightofangst" This is the first time I've played him without taking away half of his important memories, so not sure how I'm doing!

[Ou] Romeo | Romeo's Blue Skies | lj user="spiritsup"

[Ou] Taiki | 12 Kingdoms | lj user="isnotagiraffe" Brand new muse so crit away please!

[ocariness]

Your Suzaku seems alright so far, and granted, this is only basing it on what I've seen, and might be me being nitpicky, but... anyway.

I am a huge Code Geass fan, but I've noticed this for your tags in general, just a bit? My crit isn't too serious and is faaaairly easy to correct, really--you just need some punctuation and commas at times. That's... really all I can see wrong? I mean, I'm not pretending I am a perfect typist or writer, myself, but your sentence flow needs work, and your tags can be a bit on the short side, sometimes as well. But really, that's fine, so long as you give us all something to go off of on our replies.

Otherwise you seem to be portraying Suzaku fine so far (I can't say for the others as I don't know their canons, sadly), though I'll have to see more of him to know for sure, haha. You will have any concrit I can give once I am more familiar with your Suzaku, however, Katy. By all means, keep going! I am sure you can only improve. The best way to become a better writer is to keep writing and RPing, after all! So this might just be my advice and a passerby trying to help. c:

♥

[token_vengeance]

Linds

[OU] Erik Lehnsherr | X Men First Class | token_vengeance

I do have an Anon, non IP logging HMD on my journal if you want to talk to me anonymously. I will say that I need to get my activity up. Erik has some stuff up his sleeve (like tearing a few floors up), but I'm currently coming down on a con crunch. After next week I'll be throwing myself in more fully, so I apologize now for my slow tagging. I do know I need to fix that.

♥

[groovy_mutation]

Erik you're too angry, you need to tone it down. Make friends not war.

lol totally legit crit from Charles to Erik

If I tried criting you I'd gush all over the place and you already know I think you're amazing. But as for activity you're okay, with your Con crunch and stuff and being in another game and all that.

We can work on not being slow pokes together, my friend.

[handpuppeeet.livejournal.com]

Ventus [OU] | Kingdom Hearts | f0rceless
Ankh [OU] | Kamen Rider OOO | handpuppeeet

all of the 'K' serieses

[groovy_mutation]

All I have to crit on is that we need to thread again. Because I say so.

worst crit ever

[princesslantern.livejournal.com]

Milagro Reyes | DC Comics AU1 | princesslantern

[pchaaair]

Debs;

Tavros Nitram [OU] | Homestuck | pchaaair
Merrill [OU] | Dragon Age II | direbunnies

[groovy_mutation]

I've only just done a little tagging with your Merrill so far, but I hear her voice very well. That awkwardness she has at times when she speaks. How she'll kind of trail off and then seem to get back on track and be all lol whoops.

I think you're doing good and I liked that thread with Fenris on his post all FRIEND? DID YOU CALL ME A FRIEND :333 oh Merrill.

[unexculpable]

Edward Elric [OU] | Fullmetal Alchemist | unexculpable

I have an anon-enabled HMD on his journal if you feel more comfortable posting there! Any and all crit would be INCREDIBLY appreciated. I worry about his voice forever. ;A;

[needsmoartact.livejournal.com]

Keiki | needsmoartact | Twelve Kingdoms

He's a new character so I'm eager to work out any kinks in my playing. Seriously, anything you can think of would be welcome. c:

[needsmoartact.livejournal.com]

orite and he's OU :|a /derp

[tomatatas]

Nutmeg

Italy Romana [AU!2] | Axis Powers Hetalia; Nyotalia | tomatatas

She's also got an anon enabled, screened HMD at the top of her journal if you're more comfy with that!

[doeswindythings.livejournal.com]

John Egbert | Homestuck | doeswindythings

I've been trying to work on my activity. :|a

[cocksprite.livejournal.com]

davesprite / homestuck / ^^^^

[quarkylass]

please keep playing davesprite forever because i love him

[foretolds.livejournal.com]

Jenny

[OU] Terezi Pyrope | Homestuck | foretolds

Leah

[allthefeelings.livejournal.com]

Eridan Ampora [OU]

[romcomedian.livejournal.com]

Karkat Vantas [AU] | Homestuck | romcomedian
Her Imperious Condescension [AU] | Homestuck | cullionfish

[quarkylass]

Man-D

Jade Harley [AU2] | Homestuck | quarkylass

[polishrule.livejournal.com]

Poland [OU] | Axis Powers Hetalia | polishrule

[groovy_mutation]

Charles Xavier [OU] | X-Men: First Class | groovy_mutation

I could be super better at my tagging rate. Slow as all hell is not good :(

[terranicidal.livejournal.com]

Abel Nightroad [0U] | Trinity Blood (Red Mars era) | terranicidal

Please feel free to let me know if there's anything on your mind!

[timegame.livejournal.com]

Aradia Megido [OU] | Homestuck |[Bad username or site: @ livejournal.com]
Chidori Yoshino [AU] | Persona 3 | [Bad username or site: @ livejournal.com]

[(Anonymous)]

Your Aradia seems very mutable at times. This happened especially during the movie night, when she cheered at one of the dudes dying in Con Air after the other trolls started laughing. While on the whole the trolls treat death very lightly, Aradia never has. Death is hard. She understands that better than anybody. Also, I'm not at all sure why she was cuddling with Eridan. He murdered Kanaya and Feferi, blinded Aradia's in-game matesprit, and destroyed any hope the trolls had for a future.